It
started off with me commenting about the rain in Hyd, India and Golam wanting
that rain in Bangladesh as well. Looking at Golam's dialogue, I wondered if we
could collaborate on a poem. I asked him to begin first and he came out with
this beautiful poem titled ‘He:’. It was quiet challenging to come up another
to match his and I ended up with various versions. Finally I decided on this
one, titled, 'She:'.
He:
When
the humid wind turned soothing cold
and the sweltering sun buried below
the dark grey clouds,
and the sweltering sun buried below
the dark grey clouds,
my
wait to greet the rain - I could feel,
would
be over soon.
As Gods played Diwali in the sky,
As Gods played Diwali in the sky,
Thunders,
blue and white
appeared
to my eyes.
I thought I could hear your song
I thought I could hear your song
and
your sigh!
Yesterday
you said, it was raining there,
and when I asked you for some,
and when I asked you for some,
You
replied, 'But that I cannot share'!
Deep
down I knew,
your
love was too sublime
to deny me anything from your heart.
So when the raindrops smelled like you
I wasn't surprised at all, I was,
to deny me anything from your heart.
So when the raindrops smelled like you
I wasn't surprised at all, I was,
rather
soaking wet
from
the rain
and
glowing from your love.
She:
I stand in
the balcony
watching
the downpour, watching for you.
As the rain
dances down my skin
I wonder if
you hide behind
these dark
clouds,
playing
with my tresses
while
I shiver under your
lingering
gaze.
My thoughts
are like
paper boats
sailing here and there...
and the wet
chant takes me
to a buried
moment.
Of incense
and crushed rose petals.
Of candle
light and soft kisses.
Of slow
strokes and silken sighs.
Of thunder
and faraway lightning.
I am drenched
in those memories
and time
grows heavy with longing.
I wonder if
the caress of the breeze
carries my
unspoken song!
For the
wind blew strong
and the
raindrops smelled like you,
I knew I
had found my sanctuary!
I found
you!
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Wow !!! So beautiful And so well complemented too.
ReplyDeleteKudos to the both of you.
nice one. :-)
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