usability w it is a no nonsense poem.. The point is hammered like nail on the head. I like the flow... Many different ideas converging towards the end to provide that punch. Simply loved the venurability you show at the end... Unexpected but it makes the reader feel more human, more in touch with this waterfall of emotions
Good poem... Liked it
ReplyDeleteBeautiful pic too...
ReplyDeleteVery well depicts a love gone away. Kudos to you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Chanti!
DeleteSurprises are always surprises, though they seem to have been pre-ordained...
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Ken! Everything seems to be preordained, every move we make, every chance we take.
Deleteusability w it is a no nonsense poem.. The point is hammered like nail on the head. I like the flow... Many different ideas converging towards the end to provide that punch. Simply loved the venurability you show at the end... Unexpected but it makes the reader feel more human, more in touch with this waterfall of emotions
ReplyDeleteThanks bhai! U will always a different angle to comment about!
ReplyDeleteAasaaa, I thank God everyday that I at least have one skill that I can put to use. Thanks to you all who keep reading what I write.
ReplyDeleteAwesome...you are talented and blessed.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much K!
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